New tune: Allright After All.. is the mix "allright"?

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Any opinions on the mix or composition appreciated! I know I'm not the greatest vocalist already.. :o

 
I thought it was going to be Oh Darlin' from Abbey Road at 1st.
Nice stuff but, possibly, too nice. The solo injects a bit of bite but the delivery is too calm and pleasant.
Good arrangement!
 
Yeah that's me on the guitar, and everything.. :-)

LOL, someone else said my vocal was "sweet".. Dang, gotta get me some bad boy raunch.. and I even smoke!
 
Don't worry 'bout smoking more. It won't help your guitar--and your guitar doesn't need any help. Sweet tune, and great playing--nice work!
 
A good stable mix. It has a small amount of exaggerated sibilance (7000 Hz?) on the vocals, but not that bad.

Overall it was easy to listen to and enjoy. A fine job.
 
The mix is clean, and has a good balance of things going on at any time. I do not feel overwhelmed. Or underwhelmed.

Really good tune.

Love the solo.

The one comment I have for improvement is simply this. And I can't quite put my finger on exactly what, and this is probably not a helpful comment... but here goes...

everything is well done.. but it sounds like the musical approach here was to play it safe. Surprise me somehow. Make me do a double take. Throw me a curve ball.

Again - it's a fine tune. But I think it could be a great tune.

Rick
 
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