NEW TRACK: "In 2 U"!!!!!

Im not diggin it. Ur flow isnt smooth it sounds like ur forcing words to fit instead of using words that flow with the beat
 
I had to give feedback since u reppin da 954 (I'm in oakand Park)

The song is cool. as far the flow comment above, i think it just sounds like you we're reading your rhyme sheet rather than memorizing you lyrics. You prolly got it down word for word now since listening to the recoding you did. So maybe re-record it and it'll be more fluid.
 
So what exactly doesnt sound smooth? Xman.

I listened to it numerous of times to get it right. To me it sounds good.

Lots of catz thought it was tight.

But thanks for da honest feedback.
 
Hi_D_Ho_Man said:
I had to give feedback since u reppin da 954 (I'm in oakand Park)

The song is cool. as far the flow comment above, i think it just sounds like you we're reading your rhyme sheet rather than memorizing you lyrics. You prolly got it down word for word now since listening to the recoding you did. So maybe re-record it and it'll be more fluid.
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Yeah im only 2 mins from Oakland park. Im on University and Commerical. Thanks for the feedback. the song aint done yet. Im gonna listen to it for a couple more days until I get da lyrics down like the back of my hand.
 
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