New Track for Feedback!!

[stealth_prod]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=utF8nELq6eE&feature=player_embedded




Check it out and please let me know what you think. I feel there is always room to improve so let me know your thoughts. Thanks for taking the time.

 

[louisv]

make the verse shorter and call the song ''Hey'' and it's a hit.
but that's just me, anyway, cool song nice flow,
one negative thing, i don't like the synth used during the chorus,don't remove it just use another synth.
bad english sorry.

that's just my opinion.

 

[madfresh]

I usually don't listen to this kind of hip hop but this actually sounded really good. The beat is nice and both rappers are tight, especially the guy on the second verse. Really nice flow and rhymes there. Keep it up!

Peace!

 

[stealth_prod]

Thanks I appreciate it. The dude on the second verse was my boy "hopsin" check him out, def one of the best lyrical up and comers around.

 

[gullyjewelz]

What is "this type" of hip hop?
Im not sure of the intro. But the verse is hot n the flow is good!

 

[stealth_prod]

Yeah was kind of wondering about the "kind" of hip hop your referring to. The intro was a last minute add on. Basically just trying to I guess symbolize trying to make my way through hip hop. Im thinking a rework will be done before the album is printed.

Thanks everyone again for the feedback. It is really appreciated.

 

[noOneyuNo]

awecome!YO!!