New to this site... Looking for any/all feedback

[Richard Michael]

This was one of the first recordings I did that I believe is moving in the right direction..... I'd love to hear as much detailed feedback as possible.

 

[rayc]

The vocals have a Eddie Vedder manneredness to them.
They also seem too far out front.
The mix seems almost mono with a few token things that occur out towards the edges occasionally.
The vocals are clear (loud & clear) as are most of the drums but everything else seems in a cupboard until the solo busts out for a second before being put away again until the fade.
This could be good but you need to remix probably with a better monitoring set up.

 

[rickidoo]

Not sure if you changed out the version since Rayc posted his comments, but the vocals in teh 1st to paras are not far enough out front for me... the background is competing. Maybe part of that is the echo. The vocals seem to get better after that. But i am having difficulty making out what the words are. I am listening on high quality audio mix headphones.

 

[Richard Michael]

Thank you Very Much!

 

[TripleM]

Well sung. I thought you set the mood in the song pretty well.

I thought the electric rhythm guitars were a bit thin and set far back in the mix. I'd like more power and crunch out of them.

I think I'd back off the reverb level on the vocals. They're pretty wet and that makes them a bit too indistinct.

There's a little clickiness in one or more drum samples. Gets a little distracting in spots.

 

[mgjr73]

Listening through "real world", high quality desktop speakers. Agree with the reverb comments. It makes your words indistinct. Try to move it to a dryer area. Right now it sounds like karaoke. Guitars are the same way. Maybe turn down the drum levels without doing anything else on the other tracks and see how it sounds. The tracks are just not "glued" together yet.

 

[Richard Michael]

Listening through "real world", high quality desktop speakers. Agree with the reverb comments. It makes your words indistinct. Try to move it to a dryer area. Right now it sounds like karaoke. Guitars are the same way. Maybe turn down the drum levels without doing anything else on the other tracks and see how it sounds. The tracks are just not "glued" together yet.

Thanks for the advice!

 

[Richard Michael]

Well sung. I thought you set the mood in the song pretty well.

I thought the electric rhythm guitars were a bit thin and set far back in the mix. I'd like more power and crunch out of them.

I think I'd back off the reverb level on the vocals. They're pretty wet and that makes them a bit too indistinct.

There's a little clickiness in one or more drum samples. Gets a little distracting in spots.

The "Click" Is Actually A Bit Chopper I used on the drums to give them a strange defination.