Nice delicate ac. gtr. sound.
yeah...singing is a tad "rough" and fx'd...and low in volume...
nice feel to the tune and the elec. gtrs compliment it well too.
for a shortie...it still has a strange ending
finished up, this'll be a goodie. (and sand those vocals down and make 'em smooth....)
Nice tune, did you use a pop filter for the vocals. I might also try turning down the diffusion on the reverb for the vocals. Might help to clean it up.
This song has a lot of potential. The end is rather abrupt though. I didn't think the vocals were that rough at all. The strings sounded familiar they didn't come from an Alesis did they? Good job!