12 hours wasn't long to wait! A reply every 20 or 30 views is OK.
Anyway, I listened. Only my views as always - take or leave - and in comparison to other stuff I listen to here; not saying I could do better
Drums too far back, the intro was too long, bass sounded thin, although nicely played, particularly later on. Nice lead playing, but it rather jumped out of the right speaker.
I stopped at the 4 minute point, frankly I'd had rather more than enough - why does it go on so long? Are there going to be vocals on top; if not, there needs to be much more variety (musically, if not instrumentally).
Some promise there though - keep at it, but as you're asking for comments mine is taht you should think about stretching yourself a bit more musically, in the sense of variation and colour.
Cheers
Garry