New Song Recorded : Needs Harsh Critique

[Blor007]

Hi guys,

Can you please critique this song?
It's supposed to end up on a cd (together with the other song i posted)
Be as harsh as you can

edit update*

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Greetz,
Blor007@hotmail.com
(you can always add me if you want to help out a beginner)

 

[giraffe]

if your really careful you could probably eq that ring out of the snare
(i'm one of the few people thinks 57 is not the answer for a snare)
i'd like more kik

thats about it really, sounds good

 

[noodles2k5]

I'm getting no low end here. More kick and bass. The group vocals sound kinda weak. Good job over all though.

 

[donkeystyle]

i would like to hear more kick drum and bass guitar. although i typically would hate this snare sound, i think it's cool for this type of music.

 

[Blor007]

Update!!

http://users.pandora.be/blor007/Secret/
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