NEW SONG R2OS, comments & advice?

[r4m]

Dude! I like the tune! Very Beatle-ish! Nice Job recording!
No complaints here. Better job than I could do!!!!

 

[Kristina]

I like. there's a bit of noise on the vocals that is kind of annoying, but other than that I really like this. if you could clean it up a bit it'd be fantastic.

 

[roomx]

i think its a bit clicky but that fits this song perfrct imo

when i read the lyrics i was thinking "this can't be good"
but when i gave it a listen i was pleased to be wrong.

if i heard this on the radio i would not change the station

Thanks.

Where can I listen to your music?

 

[roomx]

Dude! I like the tune! Very Beatle-ish! Nice Job recording!
No complaints here. Better job than I could do!!!!

He he.
Thank you for listening. What kind of music do you make?

 

[roomx]

I like. there's a bit of noise on the vocals that is kind of annoying, but other than that I really like this. if you could clean it up a bit it'd be fantastic.

How do I fix that noise, would you say? Is it the "ess-es" you're thinking about, or is it just general hiss?

Thank you for listening...

 

[roomx]

CME UF8 Keyboard

btw....that keyboard looks pretty sweet. I wish I had taken a look at it before I bought one.

Yeah, but I'm looking for some user opinions before I buy it, I think.

CME UF8 Keyboard

 

[r4m]

He he.
Thank you for listening. What kind of music do you make?

I'm a rocker and I have one posted here burried among the masses of
mp3 critqes!

 

[Sanjanjoseph]

woah man, sounds really good...really like the tune...its real old school.