It could be nice song, the tone is great and you've got nice riffs here, though in my opinion that part between 38 and 45 second is weird, or it may seem like that just because of this recording. Nonetheless keep it up and I hope you've made a full song out of it
Interesting tune. Watch the lead guitar timing at :07-08. Something there and going into the break is just slightly out of time. Good guitar tones. Waiting for the bass! Nice job.