The intro was a bit long for my tastes. I'm going to be as honest as I can here.
You have a lot of natural energy - I wouldn't've picked the sample
you used, but using the beat, and hearing your flow, you've got
some potential. Don't forget the "natural energy" - something some people will never find or develop. Use that to your advantage cuz you've got it. Work on the production a bit. Need some catchy hooks, and a chorus that knocks my socks off.
With natural energy like that, you might want to keep everything as original as possible - you don't need a sample to enhance that energy. You've got a great vocal sound, and that's important to recognize.
One of the few flows I've been able to get into on this board.
Liked it.
my 2 pentz.
-muzakal
