new song, opinions please

[a27thletter]

myspace.com/comfortinyesterday

the new song is the one titled "sad song"

check it out and tell me what you think.

it was written and recorded all within about an hour so its not all that thought out and its very basic and simple, but let me know what you think of the sound.

thanks all
~barry

 

[ido1957]

Barry - make it easier to get to your great song.....post a clickable link......like this:

http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewprofile&friendid=32945743

On to the music....

- Very good recording as far as sound goes...The vocals and rhythm guitar have a real nice tone to them - I'd call it "rich" or thick.... The lead guitar is a little brash - maybe take the highs down a tad (just my taste).

The song is pretty allright so far, simple like you said. I take that to mean you're still working towards a final version....

 

[Re-Lapse]

I'll have to agree partially with ido.

The highs need to be turned down.

The song is a fairly good recording, I didn't have the time to listen to the lyrics to judge them. But, I do know that it needs something more. I'm not quite sure at this point and time what that "more' is. But it needs something more, maybe more to your vocals, a backup, something. But it's too "alone"

The song is good. Great work, keep it up and keep pushin' towards the top.

Hope this helps.

--Re-Lapse

 

[a27thletter]

thanks alot, , how do you guys feel about the "tone" of my voice, or "quality"? i'm not sure, because its my voice, i dont know whether i like it or not, haha. but yes, i am working toward a final product with this one, i'll post it up when its finished.

~barry