NEW SONG ON mp3.com----LISTEN,CRITIQUE

Hi John,

Hey, I took a listen to your song. Overall, I really liked it. My only major complaint is the rhytm guitar that the song begins with and then continues throught out. I guess it sits in front of the mix just a bit too much and I think it sounds a bit thin. If your up for suggestions, I would lower the level once the instruments and/or vocals come in. Also, fade in a little more bass and/or midrange after a couple of measures. Oh, maybe chorus the guitar instead of flange. I mean none of this to be insulting. These are MY opinions on what I think would make your nice little tune a bit better. I do think your vocals sounded very professional. what was the mic setup you used? They definitely are mixed very well--as is the entire song. Good job!

Peace, Jim
 
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