It's not a bad tune.I think the reason people havent responded is because you have your tunes on mp3.com.Most people wont even bother with the sign in process(e-mail,age,sex,language,location,zip code etc..)...most everybody who posts here uses Nowhereradio.com...it's a lot less cumbersome.
Ok,now about your tune.Im just an average listener recorder so I dont have any tips,just some observations....first off the vocals are a little too out front and the doubling effect is in the overkill range.Im a big fan of doubling vocals but these are overdone to the point where they sound too effected....there are a few sync problems with the doubling also...not bad but they fluctuate every now and then and they are flat on certain words.
The word that holds out at 2:15 is flat and wavering.The doubling is also off.It's really noticeable.....when doubling vox you have to be willing to spend 100's of takes to make each word doubled perfectly to pull it off....I know how it is,Im guilty of the same thing myself sometimes.
The back up vocal stuff is really good.
The guitars sound a little out of tune after the second one comes in on the left side but isnt so noticeable when the song gets going.
They sound really direct.Thats not a bad thing if thats what you are going for.They sound really chorused too.......Chorused guitars and double vocals equal a chorus overkill in the mix.
The drums and bass could stand to be more prominent in the mix.They are too far back in the mix at the moment.
Nice song though.....nice little melody(but the do do do do do do does get a little annoying after awhile
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Good song but needs work.
Now post your stuff on nowhereradio so people will listen to it!15 megabytes free and only $2.50 a month for unlimited space.I think you get a month free if you pay for 12 months......anyway it's FREE for 15 megabytes.You'll get more traffic from here by signing up there.A lot of poeple have accounts at both places.
