New Song Needs Feedback

[imalion]

Hi everyone. Here is My moment of truth. The song name is "Run Away". I recorded it on my Boss BR8, and I ran it digitally into my computer. Then fine tuned it in Cakewalk.

This is my FIRST song I have ever posted for feedback so please be honest.

Here is the link. http://artists.mp3s.com/artists/357/steven_diemert.html

Thanks in advance.

Steven