New Song - Mix Help Please

[Chili]

Another well written song. Really like it. Was that line, " You treat happiness like a crime"? That's cool.

It took a couple of listens to warm up to the "la-la-la'sss", but they're okay. You've got a lot of comments already. I can't add anymore. Just that I like the song.

peace,

 

[dewhitt]

Thanks, Chili, I appreciate it. I just updated the mix with a very subtle change to the drum levels, I rode the fader through the song to bump them up about 0.5 - 0.8 dB in spots where they were getting lost a little. The new mix is up on soundclick for anyone who wants to check it out, but again, the changes are very slight: SoundClick artist: Dave DeWhitt - page with MP3 music downloads

Thanks again to everyone for all the great feedback!

Best,

Dave DeWhitt
SoundClick artist: Dave DeWhitt - page with MP3 music downloads

 

[kcearl]

missed the boat on this Dave...just wanted to say great track/mix...plenty of life about it and hit the commercial level it was aiming for imo


good job man

 

[maximusbs]

Congrats Dave! This tunes' been ridin' the 'bump' train for two weeks! I'll bump it again just cuz you put that freaky post-lead-break-like-whatchamacalit in there
Way to dig out the nugget Keith!!

 

[RAMI]

I'm a dewhitt fan. I love the open and driving drum sound on this. As the other tunes I've heard from you, it's all well done. Cool voice too.

 

[joeym]

Oh, I just love your voice on this one Dave!
Nice hooky melody, great sounding drums and a wonderful performance.
I don't think this is cheesy at all, it's rock-solid and sounds very pro. Well done!