New Song looking for some feedback

[Longshot3]

Almost finished with this song, i got a list of things i got to fix but i just wanted to know what others think about the mix and what needs fixin. Thanks.

http://www.broadjam.com/transmit/transmit.asp?txygnbz=31418&chkldsxv1=244752&yhgbndsq=1

 

[Che Frone]

nice

yo man, you've got a nice song here. it has a realy fort minor feel to it that im digging. and the mix is good too, even though maybe the drums should be a little louder.

 

[Longshot3]

Thanks I appreciate it

 

[Garik]

Good song,sounds kinda thin though.

 

[djdownload]

Yo, I like this track. I think the mastering is pretty good. It maybe a little thin, but it's a nice track. Well done.

 

[REEK BROCK]

I like it.Not thin to me.Sometimes you can have too much going on in a song.Keep it up.

 

[jugalo180]

I'm listening through cpu monitors but for what it's worth it sounds clean, and i'm feeling the song. It's a nice break from the hard edgy stuff. I really like the change up at the 02:19 mark. Good work!