guitarist_44
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This is a song I wrote about 5 months ago, I thought I would post it because I still play it and relaly like it. Its done on an acoustic guitar, and its kind of folk song with some alternative worked into it. Please feel free to post your honest opinions, thank you, anything is greatly appreciated!
The song is called... I Bid You Adieu
Verse 1:
Everyday people are constantly trying,
Just to make it to the top of the world.
Everyone is so tired of fighting,
Their aching bodies all getting hurled.
Around and around there isn't much I can do
Except stick in the race and hope never to lose.
The trip is a long one, it may never end,
Only one in a million can have managed to win.
Chorus:
I'll climb to the top of the pyramid.
Acending through all of the steps.
I'll never take no for an answer.
Today is a day I will never forget.
Verse 2:
I don't need the money but I'll take all the rest,
Just playing my music is what I do best,
For all my life you will hopefully listen,
To the songs that I write and the memories I'm missin'
Tonight, wooo ooo ooo, That I'm missin' tonight...
Chorus:
I'll climb to the top of the pyramid.
Acending through all of the steps.
I'll never take no for answer.
This is something I'll never regret.
Verse 3:
So now I have made it,
Theres not much to do,
I'm sitting here waiting,
Waiting for you.
You will never come,
I know this is true,
As I lay in my grave,
I bid you adieu.
THANK YOU AGAIN!
The song is called... I Bid You Adieu
Verse 1:
Everyday people are constantly trying,
Just to make it to the top of the world.
Everyone is so tired of fighting,
Their aching bodies all getting hurled.
Around and around there isn't much I can do
Except stick in the race and hope never to lose.
The trip is a long one, it may never end,
Only one in a million can have managed to win.
Chorus:
I'll climb to the top of the pyramid.
Acending through all of the steps.
I'll never take no for an answer.
Today is a day I will never forget.
Verse 2:
I don't need the money but I'll take all the rest,
Just playing my music is what I do best,
For all my life you will hopefully listen,
To the songs that I write and the memories I'm missin'
Tonight, wooo ooo ooo, That I'm missin' tonight...
Chorus:
I'll climb to the top of the pyramid.
Acending through all of the steps.
I'll never take no for answer.
This is something I'll never regret.
Verse 3:
So now I have made it,
Theres not much to do,
I'm sitting here waiting,
Waiting for you.
You will never come,
I know this is true,
As I lay in my grave,
I bid you adieu.
THANK YOU AGAIN!