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I wrote a new song and I recorded it using Jamstudio.com and Acoustica's Mixcraft 3. I am not a singer (and it shows) but I would appreciate feedback about the song itself. I would love it if a female vocalist would record the lead vocals to the song, just for fun. Anyone interested? The song is in the key of A.
Thanks kindly.
"First Love"
Written by: Joseph Spain
Music created using Jamstudio.com and Acoustica Mixcraft 3
URL: http://www.box.net/shared/j5hlqzuhut
verse 1
When darkness falls and you're asleep
and dreaming does your heart beat faster
Do you replay the love we made
The summer when our love began as only friends
The sweetest kisses never end
There's truth inside your memories
Your heart reveals you've always loved me
chorus
Can you hear me, my one love in your mind
And can you see me, my one love with your eyes
And can you feel me, my one love inside your heart
Please believe, tell me you love me
My love, please believe your first love can never die
verse 2
Someday in time, our story goes
you'll be with me, your love will save me
There'll come a day my heart will be the one you hold
Across the sea and timeless sands
You'll drink of water from my hands
Surrender to your memories
Our hearts are one, you'll always love me
chorus
Can you hear me, my one love in your mind
And can you see me, my one love with your eyes
And can you feel me, my one love inside your heart
Please believe, tell me you love me
My love, please believe your first love can never die
chorus
Can you hear me, my one love in your mind
And can you see me, my one love with your eyes
And can you feel me, my one love inside your heart
Please believe, tell me you love me
My love, please believe your first love can never die
release
Can you hear me, my one love in your mind
Can you see me, my one love with your eyes
Can you hear me, my one love in your mind
Can you see me, my one love with your eyes
(repeat release through fade)
Thanks kindly.
"First Love"
Written by: Joseph Spain
Music created using Jamstudio.com and Acoustica Mixcraft 3
URL: http://www.box.net/shared/j5hlqzuhut
verse 1
When darkness falls and you're asleep
and dreaming does your heart beat faster
Do you replay the love we made
The summer when our love began as only friends
The sweetest kisses never end
There's truth inside your memories
Your heart reveals you've always loved me
chorus
Can you hear me, my one love in your mind
And can you see me, my one love with your eyes
And can you feel me, my one love inside your heart
Please believe, tell me you love me
My love, please believe your first love can never die
verse 2
Someday in time, our story goes
you'll be with me, your love will save me
There'll come a day my heart will be the one you hold
Across the sea and timeless sands
You'll drink of water from my hands
Surrender to your memories
Our hearts are one, you'll always love me
chorus
Can you hear me, my one love in your mind
And can you see me, my one love with your eyes
And can you feel me, my one love inside your heart
Please believe, tell me you love me
My love, please believe your first love can never die
chorus
Can you hear me, my one love in your mind
And can you see me, my one love with your eyes
And can you feel me, my one love inside your heart
Please believe, tell me you love me
My love, please believe your first love can never die
release
Can you hear me, my one love in your mind
Can you see me, my one love with your eyes
Can you hear me, my one love in your mind
Can you see me, my one love with your eyes
(repeat release through fade)