New song- critique welcome

Hi Sunny,

First of all, great song! :)

Regarding the mix:

1) it seems left-heavy to me.

2) some of the guitar parts are too loud (i.e. the distorted refrain), and some are too soft (i.e. the reverby Oasis style lick that comes in at 2' or so).

3) there is an overall fuzziness to the sound that detracts somewhat. I would like to hear more space between sounds

4) drums sounds pretty rough for the most part throughout

Hope this helps. As I said, I really like the song, and your singing is great!

Chris
 
Guitar tone starts bad.
Cymbal seems to overpower things here and there.
More reverb on vocals and bring them up a bit.

I can't put my finger on it but something sounds tinny, distorted, uh, I am not sure what it is. May just be the overall mix has an edgy tone that wears on my ears?

Overall, a good pop tune. Has a very pleasant melody.
Keep refining it, it has lots of potential, IMO.
 
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