Nice guitar sound ... and ... very ... creative, and I'm not being condescending.
Straight 8th chords ... it's a really nice change and promotes a hell of a lot of tension.
We are begging you to break out of it.
Plus, there's lot's of room for collaboration.
OK ... to much reverb.
Don't hide your vocal from THIS board, especially when it's good, and this is a nice vocal.
The backups are there ... but the guitar is a bit to loud, when the vocal comes in, maybe you should take some verb off the guitar with an envelope at that point. So a drier vocal is a little more there.
The percussion instrument at 1:55 is ... distorted ? Is that 'rap mouth' ? 'mouth drum' ? whaaaaaat is that thang ?
So, it's all about minimalism for a bit ... and yes, the straight 8ths in the guitar are quite cool at this point.
If I had to go pee ... I wouldn't until the song was over.
very effective.
Too much reverb, if yer gonna do somethin' cool vith this vocal ... phase it, or flange it, and the reverb guitar makes a bit more sense, but it needs less reverb.
I can understand the words, not a struggle, but I don't think they are super important here ... door number 2
This is a cool song.
Actually, pulling off a good straight 8th performance in the guitar is much harder than some think.
I don't think you should have ever released us from the guitar 'figure' ... until the last 5 or 6 beats , what happens at 04:19 should end the song ... you don't need the wierd MIDI stuff at the end, just fade down real quick.
I heard your nosehair ...
Thanks for sharing, I just recorded a cool violin riff in the beginning ... uhhhh ... in my head ;-)
Peace out dode,
Pat