New prog rock track - would love feedback

[Dave52]

Hi guys. I wanted to nail the production on this. Any pointers would be appreciated. All written and recorded by me, brought together using FL Studio.


Thanks in advance.

https://soundcloud.com/daveware/the-chrononaught-who-would-be-president

 

[PDP]

The chorus and harmony vocals sound nice, but the single lead vocal sounds awkward to me. I like all the instrumental parts of the songs, (I'm a big Todd Rundgren fan) The mix and recording sounds great on my monitors, very full and clear. I'll be interested to see if others say its bass heavy. It sounds great to me, but that usually means there's too much bass. Hah !

Anyway, overall you did a really good job.

The second tune on my website is a semi-prog rock type tune if you wanna check it out.

 

[Dave52]

Hey Peter, Thanks for having a listen. I had a lot of trouble with the lyrics to this one, there was a specific story that I had to get across and I'm not sure I completely got it… I'm very pleased with the sound and mix though - particularly the drums.

I had a listen to your stuff - I really liked it. Kinda reminded me of a poppy Trevor Rabin or very late Styx.