I think you've achieved a highly commendable recording effort here.
On my system, the bass sounds fine, and the whole track just about nails me to the back of the room with its energy. which you have captured well. Dreamer notes that the bass is a bit too rounded and not pumping enough. I agree with the roundness, but I don't mind it at all . . . I think it gives the piece a very live, stadium type of feel . . . I can easily imagine being about ten rows back at a loud gig.
I like the song as well. It is musically complex with lot of interesting things to engage attention.