new original tune

Hey Danny - I really loved listening to this song. It was an easy listen - your voice is great, the melody is interesting and the chord progression was nice. I agree that the ooh's were a bit too loud, but I love the harmonies in them. Very nice! I also agree with the other comment about waiting for drums and bass to come in. I knew they weren't going to because it was listed as acoustic, but if you wanted to, you could really build the song up about 1/3 or 1/2 way through. But it sounds great as acoustic as well.

Keep writing - sounds great!

Jen
 
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