Jeff - first off, you are among my favorite artists on this BBS. Your playing is always impeccable, and always tasty as well.
This song is great. However, as has been mentioned, the bass needs to be tamed. The fade-in is really nice, but about 0:22 the bass takes over and is quite annoying for most of the rest of the song. BTW, that is listening on my 20/20 BAS's, which don't transmit bass very well to begin with. You really need to get that under control, as it defintely detracts from the song. I didn't try to isolate the frequency, but something is resonating way too much on the bass.
I also didn't care for the change between 1:46 and 2:02. It just doesn't work for me.
I hope this doesn't come off harsher than I meant it to be. I have high expectations of you. Overall this is really nice to listen to. You mainly just need to get that bass under control.
Mike