I listened to Broken Dreams.
Things sound pretty clean and free of distortion.
The first thing that struck me was the overall level of the mix was very quiet. Maybe look into a compressor/limiter so you can boost those levels.
I'd shoot for a better vocal performance. As it was it was ok, but I sense you can do better. The song calls for some "belting out" of some of those lines. I think you pulled your punches vocally. Step up to the mic kick the song's ass and see what it sounds like. Doubling the lead vocal might sound good as well.
A few spots where the vocals were pitchy.
Little plosive at :45.
Trip.