new Modern Day Miracle songs

[geekformayor]

hey all
id love to get some feedback on a few newer songs I posted on mp3.com.

www.mp3.com/moderndaymiracle

equipment used: n-track, mxl v67 mic, crappy ART pre-amp, various plug-ins

comments on the songwriting, performance, and production are all wanted! thanks!

 

[TripleM]

I thought David Cassidy was the most interesting title of a song I heard in a while so I listened to it. I couldn't figure out what, if anything, it had anything to do with him.

There were a couple of pitch issues in the the lead vocal (e.g., 1:30 and 1:43). Some of the harmonies were a bit rough and had pitch issues. I liked some of the guitar work, particularly in the outro. You used a couple of good stero tricks (except the answer backs in the verses - I didn't care for those).