I liked the singer. There were a few good lines in that song. I liked the organ sound.
I thought the vocals had just a bit of boxiness to them. I think you could probably make a cut somewhere between 500-1000 hz and clean that up.
The guitar stuff on the wammy bar didn't work for me. Came across as an out of tune guitar. Some of the lead stuff was cool.
The guitars are real wet with reverb, but there is next to nothing on the vocals. Snare was dry too. Makes things sound a bit uncohesive. To me the guitars had way too much verb on them.
I liked the tom work. You could bring those up 3-4 dbs I think.