New Mix please rate

[davidthangjam10]

https://soundcloud.com/davidthangjam06/riff-1 wrote this short riff with my newly acquired toontrack expansion Metal Machine. hope you like it!

 

[mjbphotos]

Try the MP3 Clinic section of these forums.

 

[Chili]

I'll move this thread over.

Thnx,

 

[rayc]

I'd make all the common comments about what I hear as faults in the genre - since your snippet is very generic they'd all apply.
It's too short to say much about excpet the bass is MIA, the thump in the kick is MIA and the guitar is all fizz & no gee whizz.
But, as I said, that suggests you've mixed according the genre rules.