Hi, It sounds nicely done with a cracking vocal. It gets a little overwhelming towards the end in respect of one being able to make sense of the wall of sound, but that's not a major criticism. I'd have liked the guitars which you have sat either side of the vocal to have a little more bite, as the vocal sits well and I think the track would cope with it. There are are lot of dynamically similar things happening towards the end, and I'm wondering if maybe panning a couple of items out a little wider might help their delivery and just make it a touch more concise in that area. It's not a genre I'd go out looking for, but to be honest I'd listen to that kind of arrangement and enjoy it, so maybe I should get out more often. I like the old time feel with what sounds like a well considered and fresh arrangement. So aside from the small definition issue I mentioned towards the end, I think you have an impressive track here. Obviously someone else might completely disagree, as well you might, but I have listened intently and played the area I mentioned a few times using speakers and cans, but hey, we all have our own ears.
regards
Tim