New mix based on feedback from original thread.

[BillMurray]

I have made some changes as per the comments from my original thread: https://homerecording.com/bbs/general-discussions/mp3-mixing-clinic/critique-my-mix-381204/

I have changed the bass section by layering an electronic kick drum sample from SSD4 to mix with the acoustic kick drum from Superior Drummer. I have also attempted to make the drums simpler, yet a little more interesting. Any comments or questions would be greatly appreciated.

 

[DM60]

Mix sounded good to me.

Production comments. From ~2:00-3:04 was pretty repetitive. You may want to revisit that section, after about 15-20 secs of that, it really started getting tiresome. Just some thoughts to help give you some ideas, lower the dominant instrument and use it as is, and add some flavor to attack/counter/compliment that instrument so that the repetitive part is less dominant, but there. I whole 60 seconds of that being in your face starts to wear the song down.

Those are just opinions, overall I thought the mix is good and the song itself overall is good. Nice work.