New LCP Tune, Review please

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http://www.myspace.com/lemoncityprojectsthugs

Theres the real URL..

Listening...

mellow beat. A little too much bass, hard to hear the vocals.

Different vibe, not into the flow much. Lyrics are kinda elementary, in the fashion that they rhyme like.. "flow...-...go"... instead of "flow...-...central" or something different like that.

Ya'll have your own style and I'm not one to judge good or bad, but it could use some improvement. Do you make your own beats? if so, with what?

Other then that, a little flow work, lyric work, and it could be pretty decent.

I may have said a little too much bass, but I like the bass in my car, it's just difficult to hear the vocals on parts.

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PS: Don't take to heart. Just lil' ol me givin you a piece.
 
Thanks for the review

No problem man, I'm not immune to criticism. We make all our own beats. Meaning, playing instruments. The drums on this one are actually a modified drum machine beat though. That was my first rap ever written or recorded to be honest. I usually just do all the music and structure.

Try out the tune called Roll Call, that has an actual drummer playing on it, and the rhymes are better.
 
undrgrnd studio said:
No problem man, I'm not immune to criticism. We make all our own beats. Meaning, playing instruments. The drums on this one are actually a modified drum machine beat though. That was my first rap ever written or recorded to be honest. I usually just do all the music and structure.

Try out the tune called Roll Call, that has an actual drummer playing on it, and the rhymes are better.
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That ones a lot better. But, still could use a lot of work on the lyrics/flow. Otherwise, group effort is needed. To me, it sounds like it's one persons ideas being accepted. There should be more group effort.

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"Utilities"-5.5/10
-Nice Bassline
-Old Skool Feel
-Loving the Guitar

Very different type of track but it has that old skool feel to it. The mix could be alot better but that can be fixed. I can digg it though.

Nicole

 
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