new funny experimental songs... have a listen

[donkeypunch]

These are 3 songs i did with my computer and my guitar.

The first one is an acoustic song with no words. i think the guitar sounds pretty cool.. but im new at this so some help or any suggestions would be appreciated.

The last two are pretty funny and i tried to use some different effects on the vocal to make it sound cool

Let me know if you like them...or think they suck... ha ha

thanks

http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/world/donkeypunch/

 

[donkeypunch]

no post?
I guess my stuff sucks

 

[charger]

Maybe I just don't get your sense of humor. You have a good voice, and good technique, and the recordings are decent. But it's just hard to listen to more than once.

Let's Ball it Up seems to have the most potential, and it would be a nice song if you didn't try to make it so funny. At the second verse, where you sing it straight, I actually like it, and the "I'm dying" part actually sounds quite emotional for the first couple screams. I would be stoked to have a voice like yours.

I had to stop listening to horse shit after about 20 seconds because it was driving me nuts.

Don't you ever shut up was good, but it really didn't seem like there was much reason for it to be an intrumental, it was pretty simple.