Needs a real singer

[Cacophonix]

OK, so here’s my first attempt at home recording. I have a few reasons for posting this: Firstly, I’m a newbie at this board, and home recording in general, so this is a way of saying this is who I am and what I do. Also, if I comment on someone else’s work in future you’ll know where I’m coming from. Secondly, I would like some criticism of the song and the recording, so that I can get better at it. And lastly, as you will hear if you listen to the song, all the performances are shaky. But the one I can’t fix by myself is the vocal. I would *really* like someone to volunteer to sing the song for me, and help me create a vocal arrangement for it.

So, without further ado, here’s the link: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/algorythmicmusic.htm

Thanks to all of you who take the time make your considerable knowledge available here.

--cx