Need some opinions...

[Empact Studio]

I cant decide if this song sounds too... corny? We are planning to rap to it but I'm not sure if it sounds, hip hop enough.

Comments?

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=581450

 

[REEK BROCK]

sounds fine to me hip hop wise.There are no rules.I would just add some dark strings to fill up some space and some reverb on the snare.

 

[Empact Studio]

Alright thanks, i think i got it sounded a little better.