Need some feedback

I really liked the track 'Why'. Some points to ponder?

I feel that after about 8 bars or so into the tune, I need some low end syncopated rhythm kicking in (low-sub synth or thumping kick). Its kind of like the intro just goes on and on...

I like your stereo separation a lot. Vocals are really clean too. Sounds like the right amount of processing. Might want to bring the vocal out in front of the piano a little more in the intro.

Tasty funky guitar. Love it!

How about a full snare hit on 2/4 during the chorus? This may break up the drum part a little between the verses / chorus?

To summarize, most of it is just small tweaking (and some of it is just my personal preference!). I think that the main issue is the absence of low end. The addition of that, and I would leave my seat and start dancing!

(Just a small aside: You have a little 'fffffft' digital glitch at the beginning and end.
 
Thanks for listening.

I have no idea of where that "fffffffff" comes
from. It`s not on the cd or wav file...
When I play it, it`s at the end too.
Thanks for your time!!

Frankie
 
Hey Frankie, I check out both of the songs. Both were well done however i liked "Why" much more. Just a matter of taste but, I really liked it. Recording souded real good on both.
Nice Job.

BTW - I got your e-mail and will reply soon.

Ray J
 
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