need some feedback about my vocals

IBUDULAL said:
hey guys

i need some your feedback and comments about my vocals in this song...
(the song is in hebrew language)
thanks alot

http://boomp3.com/listen/c2bvb3dkm_9/השוטר-אזולאי
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I can neither speak nor understand the language but I do notice that several times your vox are slightly flat in pitch. Be certain to get to the correct pitch and hold it. If the pitch is too high to do that then perhaps you should try to play in a lower key. As far as the balance between guitar and vox I feel that is fine. jmho
 
Pretty ambitious song. It is both too high for your voice and too low. Did you write it? You seem to strain with the high notes and the low ones are right at the bottom of your range.
 
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