need opinions and advice

[thirdrate]

need opinions and advice on this mp3

I have been playing guitar for over four years now and am going to perform for my beginner piano class.

Here is an mp3 of what I am going to play, but it sounds just too boring and too long. There are no words because I can't sing. Yes it was poorly recorded I am sorry.

Any suggestions on how to make it more interesting?
There is a part in the middle that I want to get rid of (the part where there is rumbling)

Thank you

 

[getuhgrip]

I haven't even heard it yet and I'm sure you're bein' to hard on youself!

 

[thirdrate]

i know

I figured it out! it's ended up a little different from the mp3 i posted, but I got what I Wanted!

 

[Whyte Ice]

What changes if any did you make? Can you post a clip or something?

 

[thirdrate]

here we are:

A little sloppy, but it will have to do for now.

By the way, it's an instrumental; no singing in this one -- so I guess this is a piece, not a song.