ha,ha.
I believe it's just the walls you see between a gap between two fingers.
Anyway, I wouldn't have the word "page" following every link name:
"Photo's Page"
"About Page"
read each link down the list and it sound rediculous, the person reading it will start to sound like a stuttering, redundant- assjack.
I would scrap all the picture of you standing there "looking cool."
And if you must have a picture of yourself, I'd make it one of you actually doing something like- playing guitar, drum, or actually engineering- like moving the faders on your mixer/recorder.
Look like you have purpose rather than what looks like a kid by some empty walls. Be around your studio equipment look like you're proud of what you have right now.
I know if I was looking for a place to record, I wouldn't want to visit the studio site and see some guy posing in front of a generic wall.
Also, get quality photos.
Get a better image on the "photo PAGE" of the drumset, 'cause that looks like crap.
Instead of "Favorite Links" just put "Links" Obviously they're a favorite if you want to share them with those visiting the site.
Like someone else said, take another image of the 'rack gear' with the wires cleaned up, I would also re-rack the gear so there's no empty slots between each piece of equipment in the rack. Or get some blank panels and fill the spaces.
fix the counter on the main page, you screwed up the tag somewhere.
try and take a different photo of your mixing space, if you want sun lighting it in, wait 'til it's going down. Or somehow dim it outside, because the bright sun outside your window makes the mixing area look bad. When I look at the picture my attention is thrown from what equipment is at your desk, and instead directed to the blinding sun.
Rather than 'what's new page'
How about "News," something simple.
Take out the description, or at least "here I can tell visitors." It makes it look like the page was made by you to show someone else directly.
"Here I could tell visitors about new additions to my site so they’ll be sure to see my most recent pictures and information."
make it something like:
"This section is so I can point out the new additions to Square One Studio..."
I actually might leave it that simple, I'd try and stay low on the "MY site", "My Studio" and replace My with the name of the studio. Yes, it may be YOUR site, and YOUR studio. But it's a studio with a name, and you want people to know that studio name. Embed it into their skulls.
You're going to be sharing that studio with clients, at that moment it is their studio too.
It's like when you work at a store and someone is buying some pants and you're selling something with it. Right then the store owns the pants and everything else. But you say "do you want to pick up a belt to go with YOUR pants." (not the STORES pants, but their's.)
You're trying to sell them studio time, so stop pointing out that it's YOURs. They know it and you know it. But stop shouting it.
anyway, that's about it.
oh, and you might better organize the listing of equipment used. Rather than throwing what you use in parenthesis, and make a dedicated "Equipment" page (without the word page actually being in the link name)
okay, I'm done.
Good-luck
