my song

First off...I would recommend Lightningmp3.com. Much simpler interface for sharing clips. The song itself is well mixed. The piano sounds great. The strings are layer well. My only beef is with the arrangement. It feels like its building and building and then nothing. Needs a bit more suspense. Otherwise good job.
 
I think overall the recording is very good, but there are a few things you could tweak (adjust) to make it better.

The vocals are a little dry compared to the piano bed. You could add just a touch of reverb to fatten them up.

The delivery of the vocals is very good. Evokes and emotion and makes the listener feel that you are very passionate about what you are singing about.

I don't understand the language, so I haven't a clue what the song is about, and yet I don't doubt the passion of the vocalist. Good job with that.

The ending cuts off abruptly, you have to fix that with a piano fade out or something.

Nice work. Very powerfull.

Wig:)
 
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