Hey, sounds good. Being in mp3 is kind of messing up some of the frequencies I can hear tho. Can I offer a suggestion? You've got a very Radio Head like song, and it doesn't really have a resolution. I think if you would add in a driving part with a couple of major chords, it would do wonders. I think a G major for 8 beats followed by an F major for 8 beats (repeat as you see fit) would work very well in this song's case.