My song "My Last Request" (dark instrumentals, with melodic tones)

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This is actually a song I have posted here a while back. However I have completely re-recorded everything and now it sounds much more professional. This song has a low and forceful guitar, mixed with a higher melodic guitar, and a low bass. It also has strong lyrics\vocals that really add emotion to the song.

You can download it from my website or directly from here:

DOWNLOAD VIA WEBSITE: http://www.ingeniousmastermind.com
DIRECT LINK: (click here to start download)
STREAM: (click here to stream the song without downloading it)

Please leave comments and let me know what you think. Feedback is what fuels me. :)
 
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Could/would you post them on a site that'll stream? I don't like to download a package unless I can't avoid it.
 
I'm listening right now, very... System of A Downish. The voice needs more feeling and some warmth in my humble opinion. Also I think the snare needs to brought up a tad bit. I think there's a bit of too much low end but I have a 400 watt subwoofer so it might be that. Good stuff.
 
Thanks for the comments. Yeah, I'll work on the drums a bit. At first I thought I had the drums too high, but now it does seem a bit low.

I have also uploaded it so that it is streamable now, for the people who dont want to download it:

(click here to stream the song)
 
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Ok, I have taken you're comments into consideration and haved worked on the song a bit more. First of all, I've added a new background synth during the verse parts to give it a bit "fuller" sound. I also balanced out the volume of the bass guitar and lowered it a bit. I also upped the snare drum volume just a bit, as well as made other various slight volume adjustments.

You can redownload it using the same links in the first post of this thread.

However the link to stream it has changed, so use this link to stream the song:

(click here to stream)

For some reason, I can't edit my first post, so I cant update the "streaming" link to the new one. Ah well, just click on this one and it'll work fine.
 
a decent tune. a little dark for my tastes, but it was written that way so it's good.
 
Is the lead line a little out pitch wise compared to the rest? It could be the eastern intonation I suppose.
the vocals are a little too loud & pitchy too - that might be my reading of the slightly strained hi pitch of the vocal.
I don't know that duplicating eastern melody with udulation works so well. It rater overstates the case.
Thanks for streaming.
 
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