Mmm, thats upbeat, throw on some Bono style lyrics onto that (I mean the accent as well as the style) and you have something to develop, some drums would also be cool. No loops, hit em like you are in the room feelin it.
I would like to hear this with vocals, I think it has something.
cheers mate! gonna come up with a structure soon and hopefully get someone to sing on the track. Gonna definately keep the upbeat feel to the song too I think.