Easy Killer, you just posted your stuff yesterday. Keep in mind people do have lives, so if they don't get to your music right away, don't take it personal. Sometimes it may take days for some feedback. And please know that if you get offended easily the music industry is not for you. Every artist out there that has succeed in the least bit has faced rejection 1000's of times.
As for feedback...To be honest it sounds like you're reading your lyrics off a sheet. I would suggest putting more emotion/ feeling in to your delivery. And also try to ride the beat a little more. Remember that almost anybody can flow, but not everybody can make a hot song....Keep on the grind my man, and remember everything said is with honesty, cause it ain't helping you if we're fake. One
