My "Radio" single. let me know what ya'll think!!

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Here it is ya'll, my very "radio" single as thought up by my manager. He said i needed a song people could dance to and it had to be "radio" ready. I said i'll see what i can come up with...so here we go ya'll my radio attempt as asked of me. For all my lyrisist i did my thing and stepped up my game just listen close to wat i said (hehehe), to every1 else enjoy a song your kids can dance to without fear of cursing and killing(hahaha). ENJOY!!!!

Soul B.- Get It Poppin
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Other than being offensive to "Crypts" in the streets of LA(lol) I could groove ta dis... I can dig it
 
To be real Im a hook and beat guy...lyric analysis aint really my thing...might wanna ask somebody like Ment, Fyre, Change, or somebody like that...But like I said Im diggin the beat and Im diggin the hook so BAM...but I now know that a dope beat dont make a dope rapper dope
 
Honestly that shit his hot. Remember people, it is radio friendly. What does it take to put down a collab?? lol it's commercially nice if I could put it like that.
 
Thanks ya'll

I been catchin alot of hate from the local mc's (crap rappers) for the song because i put alot of the obvious crap on blast and they think its not true. So i told them that this is who i am as an artist and its my responsibility as well as theres to say what i see in the world and call it out. Ya'll kno i can get down with the best of them and i do all types of music but the guy's i get into debates with think talib kweli has no lyrical ability and jeezy could kill him in a battle?! point proven
 
the flow is tite - especially in the first verse - its a vicious, river-like-stream type of flow - ya deliveries are hot!!! i like the 3rd verse's flow/delivery as well - very good word play!!!

hook - perfect radio/live performance song!
 
Man...this track is hot..beat sounds distance need to be raise up in the mix a bit to blend with the vocals...but yeah i can see why B'More cats mad at this..this track is hott...

i think i gotta track for you and your camp...might be another banger for you..


im jamin this right here...
 
LOL..Im listening again and i can hear Swiss Beatz on the Hook...LOL

this is tight...
 
Honestly dude... this track needs a lot of work if you want it on the radio... Like, you'll have to stop flowing on point, you'll need to murder 3 or 4 people each verse, and move ten or twelve ki's. Then, you'll have to drop seventeen F'bombs and have em edited out so the kids think you're cool...

Then, and only then... will this be dope enough for radio.


:D
 
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL

thats too damn funny...but true sometimes :(
 
Lmao!!!!!

Its funny cause 1 of the guys was like, "hey where the cursing at, naw man i need some cursing in my music". My jaw dropped and said damn all at the same time. But hey i do me, im a lyricist by nature so im sorry to all the gangsta rappers i offended (hell no im not, get your vocab up like a real mc and then spit your thug hahaha). But thank ya'll for the compliments i just wanted to show that a catchy hook and some lyrics in your verses do exist :)
 
isnt it funny how everyone looks and listen for aal the curse words..before the like the song..

bout to go listen to it again..after i finish listening to Gully's track...yeahhh
 
I know its a "common chorus" but...

I wanted to just show that i can do that and do it well, besides the chorus is for every1 i made it to be universal and something to dance to cause kids and adults should be able to dance to something other than the electric slide know wat i mean :)
 
I know one thing fo sho that u made clear "YOURE BACK BABY!!!!!!"
 
Not bad. Not particularly my style but It ain't bad. I think the vocals could be a little more crisp. They almost sound a little muffled. Could be the mp3. Don't really know. 4:30 is kinda long for a "radio" hit. Mix up how you do the vocal. It's a little too uniform from the Chorus to the Verse. I'm not knocking it though. Just my critique.
 
Paper B? I was suppose 2 do a few tracks with that nigga but didn't get around to it.
 
Thanks ya'll

It feels good to be back too, but i really wanna get some collabs under my belt cause i miss bringing that fire with ya'll so either me or some1 else can bring the beat and we'll get things rollin!!
 
nah that is koo, the flow is tite same with the lyrics but i dont really like the chorus...thats just me but the whole song is coo
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