"My own hell" - Could I get some feedback guys?

[rilez]

Hey dudes,
I have new tune that ! finished and mastered today. For this one I had a lot of trouble sitting vocals on top of the mix, I think I got a pretty good balance. But there is definitely room for improvement. Could ya'll give it a listen and tell me what you think artistically and technically?

My own hell by rileztx on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free

 

[cobaltaudio]

intro needs to be half the length,
the first two thirds of the track are very samey, the arrangement doesn't really change much.
The drums need some work, they're not interesting enough and the samples sound too crunchy and not natural enough.

It's got potential though, keep going with it and it'll definitely get there