My New Song.. so far.. Rock style

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Good song sketch BUT change the guitar souds - they're thin, too distorted & there's no sense of what type of guitar you're using or how you're playing.
I look forward to the next step - keep us posted.
 
mitosis said:
I really like the song, pretty catchy. Are the vocals supposed to sound like that kind of radio quality sound? They sound really good if you are going for that effect. For the guitars, (this is stylelistic) but I would try cleaning them up a lot to sorta of warm hollowbody feel with individual picking notes in the chord. I don't know. Just an idea.
Well, not really. I just wanted them to sound clear and upped the mids and highs. That's one thing I'll probably change.

Ok, I'll work on the guitars. I think I'm going to completely redo this. I just don't have the sound I want..

rayc said:
Good song sketch BUT change the guitar souds - they're thin, too distorted & there's no sense of what type of guitar you're using or how you're playing.
I look forward to the next step - keep us posted.
Alright. Will do. To be honest the 'chords' throughout the song were just two strings at a time.. because I didn't want it to be messy with that distortion. So if I lower the distortion, will it generally sound better if I use fuller chords?

I just need a lot of advice on the guitar playing aspect of this. I don't really know what bands generally do.. I mean I just want it to sound good, and fit the lyrics. If you'd like to, and I'm giving you permission, then you could record some of this with the lyrics maybe the same way, but help me out on finding chords that fit it.. and sound good. Because I'm a newbie at writing, and I'm still confused over the whole 'should I play a whole chord or just a couple strings, or power chords'.. but you don't have to do that. Just if you have nothing else to do and want to help out a beginner. heh :)
 
austinm08 said:
So if I lower the distortion, will it generally sound better if I use fuller chords?

It will almost always sound much, much better. You should always use less distortion than you think you need (unless its some sort of heavy metal.) I've also come to find that that "fuzzy" distortion, no matter how little you use, is very hard to get chords to not muddy up... and the more instances of it compounds the problem.

As a general "rule of thumb" (again, with the exception of heavy stuff) you want to be able to hear the individual notes when you stum a chord. Say youre playing an open E, switching to an Em. You would wanna be able to hear the open g string in the Em. Without the presence of that string, you wouldnt be able to decifer it being an EMaj, or m. Tube amps are great in this aspect. They are very "interactive" with your playing -- set the gain just right, and pick lightly and you'll get a light distortion. Pick heavy and you'll get a heavy one.

You can get it to work without a tube amp though...just mess around with the settings on your distortion, and eventually you'll get a feel for what I'm talking about.
 
Hey austin08 - have you recorded a newer version of this with a mic'd amp? The link at the top still works but I think it still sounds like direct feed still...
This tune has lots of potential so I'm looking forward to the full version...

:) :D :) :D
 
ido1957 said:
Hey austin08 - have you recorded a newer version of this with a mic'd amp? The link at the top still works but I think it still sounds like direct feed still...
This tune has lots of potential so I'm looking forward to the full version...

:) :D :) :D
Hey.. nope.. I haven't.. I kind of strayed away from that song.. because it was all power chords..

I dunno.. anyway.. maybe that wasn't the reason. who knows.. that makes me feel really good hearing you say it has potential.. maybe I'll get back on it one of these days. I'm always trying to write new stuff.. and then I end up not finishing whatever I'm working on.. then I write something new.. and in the long run I end up with 30,000 unfinished songs.. and not a single finished, solid, song..

I have terrible habits. I need help! lol
 
whjr15 said:
It will almost always sound much, much better. You should always use less distortion than you think you need (unless its some sort of heavy metal.) I've also come to find that that "fuzzy" distortion, no matter how little you use, is very hard to get chords to not muddy up... and the more instances of it compounds the problem.

As a general "rule of thumb" (again, with the exception of heavy stuff) you want to be able to hear the individual notes when you stum a chord. Say youre playing an open E, switching to an Em. You would wanna be able to hear the open g string in the Em. Without the presence of that string, you wouldnt be able to decifer it being an EMaj, or m. Tube amps are great in this aspect. They are very "interactive" with your playing -- set the gain just right, and pick lightly and you'll get a light distortion. Pick heavy and you'll get a heavy one.

You can get it to work without a tube amp though...just mess around with the settings on your distortion, and eventually you'll get a feel for what I'm talking about.
Mr. Joe Revay! I haven't talked to you in ages.. I'm the dude on AOL.. that talked to you a few months ago.. off and on. Thanks for the input.. I really wish I had a tube amp. Have any new stuff?
 
Haha yeah its me... I noticed you started posting again, so I figured I'd chime in.

Lol, havent finished a song in a whiiiiiiiiiiile. Got a shitload of new 30 second clips though. (i see you have a bunch as well hahah) I dunno what it is, but lately I just cant get past that "initial idea & record some of it before I forget it" phase. I gotta break out of it, its starting to aggravate the hell out of me!!

Good to hear from ya again... and I still have the same AIM, if you ever feel like shootin the shit.

Later
 
whjr15 said:
Haha yeah its me... I noticed you started posting again, so I figured I'd chime in.

Lol, havent finished a song in a whiiiiiiiiiiile. Got a shitload of new 30 second clips though. (i see you have a bunch as well hahah) I dunno what it is, but lately I just cant get past that "initial idea & record some of it before I forget it" phase. I gotta break out of it, its starting to aggravate the hell out of me!!

Good to hear from ya again... and I still have the same AIM, if you ever feel like shootin the shit.

Later
Same for me.. EXACTLY the same. It bugs the crap out of me, too. Ah.. I'm sure we'll break it eventually. I'll have to get back on AIM sometime soon.
 
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