Fala,
I think the tune is cool. I don't know if it's something that I would listen to, mainly because the vocals seem to be out of place. I think they music is solid, but a bit repetitive. I think the vocals could use some work, maybe adding an effect or too to give them some life and to fit more with the sound. Also, there is a lead guitar sound lick coming from the left side I think, and it could stand a boost in volume. I was having to listen hard to make it out. Just a suggestion. Anyway, Nice job on the recording.