Nice song.    I like the way you used the synth orchestration for a break.   
My only comment is that the vocals have some of that Melodyne autotune sound, which makes them sound robotic, especially when you hold notes.   I don't know if that's by design or not.   I can't say that I've noticed it on your other songs.   I'm not a fan of that sound, especially if you can do good vocals without it.