Very good for a first effort (or for a second effort, for that matter.) Regarding the drums first: The snare sounds very dull to me, and I don't really like the cymbal being panned front and center (like it thinks it's the star of the band, instead of the singer! Huh!) The panning of the toms were a bit distracting for my taste, they were hard panned both Left and Right, like you placed a tom on each side of the stage. I found the lead vocal to be a bit too dry, and the background vocals too wet - maybe put them all in same room with a moderate reverb setting. The song has good energy and performances, just needs a few mixing tweaks. Hope that helps.