my first original music :)

[spartaboss]

Hello!
I'm new in the forum but I think I can post this here (if i'm in the wrong place sorry )
I just recorded my first original song and I would really like if you gave me an opinion

P.S. I know I'm a bad singer, but my microphone doesn't help either :/

 

[YanKleber]

 

[dobro]

Hello!
I'm new in the forum but I think I can post this here (if i'm in the wrong place sorry )
I just recorded my first original song and I would really like if you gave me an opinion

P.S. I know I'm a bad singer, but my microphone doesn't help either :/

I recorded it twice it would be great if you could tell me wich one is better

thank you for your time
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Neither one is better. They're just different.

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Like your Brazilian avatar.

 

[YanKleber]

Like your Brazilian avatar.

Thanks!